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Anne-Marie Hubert's avatar

I am not entirely sure why this piece triggers this reaction in me, but I'm finishing it in tears.

There is a calm softess in this piece that just made its way to me, I think.

A lot I liked in it. The sentences "He saw the boy who had dreamed.

The man who had failed.

The seeker who had never stopped searching."

And then, when he tells the truth to the door, I found those sentences powerful.

This is beautifully written, Steven, thank you for taking us on this journey.

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Wendy Parker's avatar

I was not expecting that. Good lead. Nice job. :)

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